my favorite place to read

fairy tale

Once upon a time, there was a family including a daughter, her mom, and grandma that lived far away from daughter that lived in a forest. The daughters always wear a red cloak and people called her Red Riding Hood.

One day when her grandmother is sick, her mom said to the daughter, ‘‘You will carry these food and vegetables to your sick grandmother.”

The girl went and then she met a wolf.

The wolf asked, “Where are you going young little girl?”

“I am going to my grandmother house to deliver these foods for my grandmother. She is sick.” Red Riding Hood Answered.

“Oh really, I think you should pick some flowers.” The Wolf said. So the girl went to pick flowers. In the meantime, the wolf went to grandma’s house. The wolf pretended to be the grandma and swallowed her. He disguised as grandma, waiting for the girl. When the girl arrives, she saw different things about grandma.

            She said, “What big hands you have.”

            She also said “What big teeth you have.”

            The wolf replies, “The better to eat you with.”

            The the wolf swallowed her. Then a hunter came to the rescue! The hunter chopped the wolf in half. The grandmother and Little Red Riding Hood came out of the wolf safely, and Little Red Riding Hood learned her lesson to be wiser. The end.

Family is very important to me

In my whole life, my family is very important to my life and my future. Because I can have to share with, they show us what is good and what is bad. They show us how to be a successful people. I can't live without my parents. Because I don't have any annoying sound that my sister shout at me, it very fun when she shout. That is the reason why my family is important to me.

Goal for Improvement

My goal for next time is tell more detail to make it longer and have more color for make the poster beautiful

feedback sandwich

I think i have face to the audience.

One thing i need to improve is add more color.

One thing i did good is i speak clearly and easy to hear.