A poor little boy exam

A POOR LITTLE BOY

Andy

19/1/2012

On a sunny beautiful morning, there were two people exercising in the park. The girl was called Emily and the boy was called Charlie. They were married and they were the richest family in the village. They always helped poor people. They gave them house to live, food and money to start their job. But the people in the village didn’t give back them anything when they became wealthy.

Suddenly, there were two thieves who stole all of Emily and Charlie’s money. People in the village couldn’t do anything because the thieves had the gun and knife. They were scared to be killed so they couldn’t do anything. But there was admirable brave boy, who tried to catch the thieves but he couldn’t because they hit them and they almost killed him. Luckily the police came and the thieves ran away. Emily and Charlie took the boy home and took care of him. He was a poor little kid. He didn’t have family so Emily and Charlie accepted him to be them son. Over one night, he grew very fast and Emily, Charlie and people in the village couldn’t understand why he grew so fast.  They thought he was not normal so the village didn’t agree to let him stay and they sent him to the old jungle and there were no people in there

He had to live with animal for 5 years. He had to eat disgusting things for instance animal dead... etc. and he was very stinky and people had to stay away from him every day. Emily and Charlie tried to ask the security if they could visit him but they didn’t let them go into the jungle because they were scared he was going to kill Emily and Charlie. So Emily and Charlie decided to come up with a plan to rescue him. They tried to explain to the village that he was not dangerous at all. He grew up in one day because the boy was magical.  However, the people in the village didn’t believe it. Emily and Charlie tried their best to make them believe but  it didn’t work.

On a long period of time, the police couldn’t find the thieves. Emily and Charlie got very mad and upset. She cried every night until one day the boy escaped and visited them. He have grows  even bigger than before. Emily told the whole story to the boy, and he was getting angry. The next morning, he started to find thieves He was facing a lot of problems ahead. Emily and Charlie hoped he would be safe and get home as soon as possible. He would prove them that the people in the village were wrong. Over four months, he caught them and sent them to the jail and gave the money back to Emily and Charlie.

The people in the Village felt very dissatisfy when they sent him to the jungle. They gave him food, house and had a party to welcome him back. Emily and Charlie adoptioned him to be them son. They had a friendly and attractive party. He lived with Emily and Charlie happily ever as their adoptional.

my favorite place to read

fairy tale

Once upon a time, there was a family including a daughter, her mom, and grandma that lived far away from daughter that lived in a forest. The daughters always wear a red cloak and people called her Red Riding Hood.

One day when her grandmother is sick, her mom said to the daughter, ‘‘You will carry these food and vegetables to your sick grandmother.”

The girl went and then she met a wolf.

The wolf asked, “Where are you going young little girl?”

“I am going to my grandmother house to deliver these foods for my grandmother. She is sick.” Red Riding Hood Answered.

“Oh really, I think you should pick some flowers.” The Wolf said. So the girl went to pick flowers. In the meantime, the wolf went to grandma’s house. The wolf pretended to be the grandma and swallowed her. He disguised as grandma, waiting for the girl. When the girl arrives, she saw different things about grandma.

            She said, “What big hands you have.”

            She also said “What big teeth you have.”

            The wolf replies, “The better to eat you with.”

            The the wolf swallowed her. Then a hunter came to the rescue! The hunter chopped the wolf in half. The grandmother and Little Red Riding Hood came out of the wolf safely, and Little Red Riding Hood learned her lesson to be wiser. The end.

Family is very important to me

In my whole life, my family is very important to my life and my future. Because I can have to share with, they show us what is good and what is bad. They show us how to be a successful people. I can't live without my parents. Because I don't have any annoying sound that my sister shout at me, it very fun when she shout. That is the reason why my family is important to me.

Goal for Improvement

My goal for next time is tell more detail to make it longer and have more color for make the poster beautiful

feedback sandwich

I think i have face to the audience.

One thing i need to improve is add more color.

One thing i did good is i speak clearly and easy to hear.